Three takes – unrequited

Love what of
indifference
being in
not on her mind

~

No note
small change
she tipped him
out of her life

~

Strange the feeling
loss of someone
you never had
yet wanted

7 thoughts on “Three takes – unrequited

  1. Hi Tara, thank you very much! I read your review this UK morning, at first without realising it was you – and thanks for getting in touch with River re ‘you/your’ – it’s fixed now – and hopefully the last one! I going to take a closer look at the poems you mentioned (and those other folk have mentioned too) to see what it is that makes me tick – though being me I like to mix it up a bit! Thanks again, you really have made my day for sure.

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