Love what of
indifference
being in
not on her mind
~
No note
small change
she tipped him
out of her life
~
Strange the feeling
loss of someone
you never had
yet wanted
Three takes – unrequited
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
'odd lines, short poems, bits of prose'
Hey Eric, I final got to sit down and read your Shorts take on poetry book! I really enjoyed it and left a review on GR and Az. I look forward to your next book!
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Hi Tara, thank you very much! I read your review this UK morning, at first without realising it was you – and thanks for getting in touch with River re ‘you/your’ – it’s fixed now – and hopefully the last one! I going to take a closer look at the poems you mentioned (and those other folk have mentioned too) to see what it is that makes me tick – though being me I like to mix it up a bit! Thanks again, you really have made my day for sure.
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I esp.like the last one. A strange feeling indeed.
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These ‘three’s’ kind of link leading to the last one – which I usually choose first!
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You did great.
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Agree.
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gets deep on the fibers of the heart, Poet, ethereal work xo
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Thank you
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