Three takes – unrequited

Love what of
being in
not on her mind


No note
small change
she tipped him
out of her life


Strange the feeling
loss of someone
you never had
yet wanted

8 thoughts on “Three takes – unrequited

  1. Hi Tara, thank you very much! I read your review this UK morning, at first without realising it was you – and thanks for getting in touch with River re ‘you/your’ – it’s fixed now – and hopefully the last one! I going to take a closer look at the poems you mentioned (and those other folk have mentioned too) to see what it is that makes me tick – though being me I like to mix it up a bit! Thanks again, you really have made my day for sure.


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