Looking back through poems, found this one, can’t figure why it didn’t make its way into ‘Shorts -a take on poetry’ – I guess I had a reason, can’t think why, next book a possibility, it reads as me…
They talked easy
nothing and something
spilled secrets
showed off their minds
They walked mostly
eating cheap places
drank wine
held hands a while
They kissed briefly
station rushed goodbyes
waved smiling
till their last time
There’s always next time. Are you preparing sth already?
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I’ve a working title of ‘Three Takes’ and checking out how much material I’ve got – if/once I’ve got enough for 100 pages I’ll submit and see if it makes the cut.
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Great.
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Oh! I loved this. Read it three times. It’s got so much heart and history. I really like how you do this with your writing.
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Thank you, Tara – ‘heart and history’ – you read me well as always!
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You make it easy with your wonderful poetry.
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Yeah, this one is really good.
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Thanks, River – I can see you seeing this one again.
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Line it up for the next go. This has beauty.
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Will do! Thanks, Roger.
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Keep on keeping on!
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