My Dear…
of a certain age
hesitates confused
concedes to follow through
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Oh Dear…
falls all to easily
phase to be endured
polar opposites it seems
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Too Dear…
foolish consequence
word baited lines
laid bare exposed behind
Three Takes – Dear Me
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
'odd lines, short poems, bits of prose'
Loved these, my dear.
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Glad to hear it, dear Bojana.
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Excellent, dear!
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Thank you kindly, dear Punam.
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Always a pleasure, Eric.
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Dear is the cost of missed opportunities?
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and thinking they exist beyond a wish!
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How true.
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Oh I had fun with these. I really like picking them apart and inserting the unspoken bits. Then, it says so much!!
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I can believe it, with your imagination!
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Haha! Thanks.
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f!@#$%^ aye! this one hits too close, excellent, poet xo
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I guess that’s the thing with these things, the less there are of my words the more there is of you… take care dear friend – thank you.
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Nicely done, Eric. They were fun to expand in my imagination.
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Thank you, Diana – this ‘Tree Takes’ seems to have set minds free a little more than I expected!
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great play of words… love how it all starts so sweet and calm, but then ends with “consequences” :)))
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Thank you, Victoria – ah, consequences, men rarely learn!
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In reality – yes, often so 🙂 but in the poem – who knows? ;))
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Who knows? Indeed!
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You dear..
Excellent.
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Dear you… thank you.
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Dear you …my pleasure.
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Poignant!
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Thank you – and for visiting.
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