Dawn light filters through
shutters angle a rainbow
I wake warm space beside
my eyes look into yours
Double shadowed wall
new day hand-held silence
you and I the night before
two strangers at the door
Saturday Shorts – At the door
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
'odd lines, short poems, bits of prose'
What a lovely image you’ve painted in my mind’s eye. I love the idea of a rainbow pouring through the blinds. The little moments between sleeping and waking.
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Ah, those moments, I’d have no words without them.
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Mine usually come in between wake and sleep vs sleep to awake… (but I’m a night owl).
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I’m a daybreak being…
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hand-held silence
Perfect!
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They tend to last longer…
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Dawn=❤️
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🤠
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Fabulous, Eric. This one got me good. 🙂
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Glad to hear it, Diana. 🤠
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Superb.
I wake warm space beside
my eyes look into yours
xoxo
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One space now occupied by two…
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A one-night stand?
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I’d like to think more…
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Okay.
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Hi Susi – I’d like to think that they think they’re more than a one night stand – as for me – I try not to think too much on a Saturday! All the best. Eric.
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It’s good, either way. 🙂 Same to you, Eric!
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