Three takes of moments

Screen scrolling
seeking moments
to slip beneath
to take her
with his words

~

You’re right
last night
one time only
don’t tell my heart
it’s awake now

~

Can’t be her fit in
a moment here
a rushed goodbye
her kiss of hello
barely dry

30 thoughts on “Three takes of moments

  1. Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous.

    Now do me and yourself a favor and submit here:
    https://failedhaiku.com/

    I got acceptance today. The guys are very nice and friendly, not strict at all about the number of syllables and, most importantly, love a good laugh. Senryu is “failed haiku,” looks like haiku but talks about the human condition and is often fun. The twist as a rule comes in the end. I know you have a lot of these so you know what you need to do. You can check out these previous issues to get the idea.

    It would have to look sth like this:

    last night one time
    don’t tell my heart
    is awake now

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