Is this okay
You paid for it
Yes, but alright for you
You need too
Not so sure
Do it, I don’t mind
I’d better go
I’m naked
Me too
No rush
I like this
Some men do
Naked
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
'odd lines, short poems, bits of prose'
This wry and clever. Good use of italics.
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Thanks, Roger – speech marks do my head in!
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Understandable.
Because I am of the opposite school and am something of a punctuation fiend (with italics of course!).
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Understood.
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Wonderful. Love it!
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Thank you, Lorraine!
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All men do. Lovely, Eric.
Btw, I’m currently reading Virginia Woolf’s Voyage Out and the other day I read sth that seemed like your style. I swear, if I didn’t know it was her, I’d say it must be you then. She says, quote:
He meant it lightly, but she took it seriously.
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Thank you, Bojana – these dialogue poems seem to be writing themselves right now! I have to admit I’ve not read any Virginia Woolf – that line for sure works for me – I guess we all relate to what’s been before, even if we don’t know it!
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I read a couple of her stuff at the university and was impressed. I recently found her complete works for .99eur. How beautiful is that!
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I’ve followed your lead – just picked up her complete works for 99 pence and while I was there picked up the complete works of Oscar Wilde for 99 pence too – such a steal I should be locked up!
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Yes!
Her stream of consciousness is what first attracted me to her, as well the wonderfully rich language and descriptions she uses on every single page. These are rather journeys into the self, with lots of self analyses and memorable dialogues – precisely the kind of stuff I like.
As for my dear Oscar, he’s another of my darlings. One and only.
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Lol
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Risque, Eric. I’m avoiding going too deeply into this one. 😀
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The bottom line (excuse the pun) – some men find they prefer to talk.
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Interesting 🙂
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More than one way to read this, G – mine as above in my reply to Diana.
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