He didn’t ask
he didn’t know
she’d say yes
he thought no
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Beside her
no one
space between
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He made her smile
maybe… next week
Saturday Shorts – 3/Oct/20
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
'words in place of molecules – boundaries explored'
Loved these, esp. that space between.
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Glad you do… these a bit like me – short and simple!
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Yes.
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Succinctly put
Why do we get in these tangles?
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What would stories be without them!
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Exactly.
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I liked all three of these, Eric. The last one seemed like there might be a chance. 🙂
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Thanks, Diana… always a chance, maybe?
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He should have asked 😉
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Maybe he’s English…
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Dear Eric, I’m delighted he made her smile, in fact I hope he asks! Wishing you and yours well. ~ Mia
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It’s made me smile to see you here, Mia – as for him asking, I guess we’ll see what next week brings? My best to you too, take care. Eric.
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Thank you!
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“Maybe” 🤔 & “next week” doesn’t sound promising…
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That amounts to a sure thing in England!
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Haha 😛
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