She chased
he stood still.
She’s naked
never in his mind.
He didn’t get it
she’d moved on.
Didn’t get it…
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
Odd lines, poems, prose – relationships, observed, imagined, real?
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
Odd lines, poems, prose – relationships, observed, imagined, real?
She chased
he stood still.
She’s naked
never in his mind.
He didn’t get it
she’d moved on.
Things could have turned out differently if she had been naked.
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She always had been – he didn’t see.
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Very clever my friend.
Loved it 🖤
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Thank you, charmed again!
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You’re most welcome 🖤
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That’s the point Eric. You did not see it 🙂
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Maybe , but then again perhaps I did –
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perhaps 🙂
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something that is happening in the world of 21 century. well put together. Never naked in his mind is such a powerful sentence.
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Thank you, your comment is much appreciated.
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The pleasure is all mine
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Finally, was she or wasn’t she naked? Tell us, Eric!
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I wasn’t there – but I’d imagine she would be!
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That settles it then 🙂
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She’s a wise girl. This one just didn’t get it. 🙂
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He certainly didn’t.
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She was smart to move on. Well done, Eric!
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Thanks, Susi!
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Of course! It’s my pleasure to applaud out the depth in the brevity. Which reminds me, when am I going to see you submit to The Short of It? 😉
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