She didn’t say he didn’t mind
he lied telling her the truth
beyond lust his hand in hers
Found her voice he lost his
she opened up he felt inside
his words her words their silence
Six Words Into Verse – 12/Jun/20
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
'odd lines, short poems, bits of prose'
I love these lines, Eric. You’re quite good at puns.
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Thank you kindly, Bojana
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She lost her voice and found his.
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As long as they both listen.
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I hope they do. It’s to their best interest.
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I’d like to think so…
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People don’t always know what’s best for them…
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Dear Eric, beautiful. Do we find our truth in the silence? I hope so. Please enjoy your day ahead, may it be lovely and memorable. ~ Mia
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Thank you, Mia. I like to think we find ourselves in silences between spoken words. It’s why I get up early morning to write before I speak. Saturday was a good day seeing my eldest daughter and her family in our garden which is allowed now in England, my younger daughter and her family we’ll see today (Sunday). Where ever you are I hope you get to smile. Eric.
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You’re welcome, Eric, and thank you for the kind wishes. I did indeed have a smile today and a wonderful laugh as well! ~ Mia
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WOW… this is gorgeous Eric… and I can interpreted in so many ways. Fantastic. Sending you two hugs.
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Always, the interpretation yours, and multiple, why have one when two to be had, G – thank you E.
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I fully agree Eric 🌸
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