As if, the fake
of his beginning
three words
he’d never heard
as if, ever spoken
not of I, of love, of you
As If
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
Odd lines, poems, prose – relationships, observed, imagined, real?
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
Odd lines, poems, prose – relationships, observed, imagined, real?
As if, the fake
of his beginning
three words
he’d never heard
as if, ever spoken
not of I, of love, of you
Good morning to you! I just began my day reading you.
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Good to hear! I was reading your blog early this morning – really like your short posts – they make you think!
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That’s good to hear too!
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Wonderful play with the words! 👏👏 ah, as always 😀
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Thank you, Victoria … after the excitement of yesterday had to get back on the bike, get back in the saddle, so to speak – and rid myself of cliches!
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This is why you are the best at poetry and the play with words is fantastic. 🙂
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That’s quite a compliment – thank you, Charlie – I think we’re all the best or do the best we can at what we do – we’re all that bit different – some styles we get, we like, some kind of pass us by but someone else will think is great – there is nought as weird as folk!
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Love your words, Eric. Wait a minute… did I write the word love? 🙂
Great piece.
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As if? Thank you, Gabriela!
And if I may you may have missed my reply to you in the comments of my ‘Thank You’ post on the 12th – of the day and moment…
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My pleasure, Eric. I wasn’t notified of any reply. I think WP is conspiring against us. I will look for it 🙂
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WordPress is quite hit and miss with notifications nowadays – that’s when they’re not putting me into spam!
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Eric, WP will not intimidate me. If I have to look for your comments in the spam folder I will. I will find them.
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It’s on my blog – a reply to your ‘congratulations’ on ‘Short’s publication…
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Well done English Eric ♥️🖤
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Good to see you here! Thank you.
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Oh Eric!! How I’ve missed your words!!
I’m so glad I’m back reading again!! 😁😁🖤
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Thank you… I’m glad you are too!
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Nothing keeps me down it seems 😁🖤
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How I’ve missed all of this great stuff – until today – is baffling to me!
But discovering you now does mean that I have lots of new reading.
Apologies & thanks!
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Thanks for the follow and no worries – I find and lose and re-find folk all the time on here – sometimes it’s me and sometimes the vagaries of WordPress!
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Very kind.
You have some great stuff here that is right up my strasse.
Good work!
Here’s to vagaries!
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Thanks! As for vagaries you may find WP have put a comment or two of mine on your work in your blog’s Spam folder (WP Admin/Comments).
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Curiouser and curiouser
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