As if, the fake
of his beginning
three words
he’d never heard
as if, ever spoken
not of I, of love, of you
As If
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
Eric Daniel Clarke – Scientist now writing – odd lines, poems even…
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
Eric Daniel Clarke – Scientist now writing – odd lines, poems even…
As if, the fake
of his beginning
three words
he’d never heard
as if, ever spoken
not of I, of love, of you
Good morning to you! I just began my day reading you.
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Good to hear! I was reading your blog early this morning – really like your short posts – they make you think!
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That’s good to hear too!
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Wonderful play with the words! 👏👏 ah, as always 😀
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Thank you, Victoria … after the excitement of yesterday had to get back on the bike, get back in the saddle, so to speak – and rid myself of cliches!
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This is why you are the best at poetry and the play with words is fantastic. 🙂
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That’s quite a compliment – thank you, Charlie – I think we’re all the best or do the best we can at what we do – we’re all that bit different – some styles we get, we like, some kind of pass us by but someone else will think is great – there is nought as weird as folk!
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Love your words, Eric. Wait a minute… did I write the word love? 🙂
Great piece.
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As if? Thank you, Gabriela!
And if I may you may have missed my reply to you in the comments of my ‘Thank You’ post on the 12th – of the day and moment…
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My pleasure, Eric. I wasn’t notified of any reply. I think WP is conspiring against us. I will look for it 🙂
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WordPress is quite hit and miss with notifications nowadays – that’s when they’re not putting me into spam!
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Eric, WP will not intimidate me. If I have to look for your comments in the spam folder I will. I will find them.
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It’s on my blog – a reply to your ‘congratulations’ on ‘Short’s publication…
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Well done English Eric ♥️🖤
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Good to see you here! Thank you.
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