He’ll say those words
yet only in his head
her heart hears
both begin their healing
Both Begin
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
Odd lines, poems, prose – relationships, observed, imagined, real?
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
Odd lines, poems, prose – relationships, observed, imagined, real?
He’ll say those words
yet only in his head
her heart hears
both begin their healing
Oh wow!
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Thank you, Punam – take care out there.
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You are welcome, Eric. You too, take care.
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So true…and I can relate to this so much.
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I hope so!
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I believe I lost Friday’s Sam and Erin. Where can I find them?
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I’ve guilt written all over me – I didn’t make the Friday post I said I would – the re-write of their beginning is taking more than a few word shifts, now aiming to post this Friday – here for you a link to the original from 2017 – https://believingsightunseen.com/2017/08/20/it-started-on-a-sunday/
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Got it!
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It’s an old word but applies so very well here.
Bittersweet.
Beautifully crafted Eric.
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Thank you, Roger – I’ve seen bittersweet used in an excellent recent poem but I can’t remember where and who wrote it – bittersweet recall.
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Lovely, Eric!
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