Last year, chances
back then, writing
got her wrong
This year, traces
what was, wasn’t
she already knew
Next year, distant
odd lines, replies
time now decline
Time Now
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
Odd lines, poems, prose – relationships, observed, imagined, real?
Ahh..Eric
Chance not taken
Leave you forsaken
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… or just mistaken.
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You got next year wrong Eric 🙂
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Wouldn’t be the first time – says he intrigued…
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She will keep him intrigued for a while 😊
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… a discussion, an interchange, an e-mail as it happens sent this UK evening to you…?
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Eric, I am going to write to you once I finish replying to the barrage of my University emails. Everything is online now. I have no idea when I am going to finish but you will find my email tomorrow morning for sure. I deeply apologize for the delay. Will you forgive me ? 🤗
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Gabriela, no apology needed, please take all the time you need, as I mentioned please read at your convenience, I really did mean it – nothing to forgive. We’re friends, we give and receive as and when we can.
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Thx, Eric.
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ahhh…the chances one takes. Damn, this one is really good.
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Thank you, Charlie – take care out there.
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You are welcome my friend. 🙂
P.S I posted something interesting. 🙂
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Achingly accurate appraisal of the problems we have in getting those feeling and thoughts out into the World Physical, in the way we meant them to be.
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Thank you, Roger – hope you’re doing okay out there.
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Thanks Eric.
We’re getting bye, and adapting.
Hope you are too. (I think it’s the best we can hope for)
I’m having perverse fun dismantling a year’s worth of work on my latest bit of fantasy…it’s the normal pattern for me
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