Greyed out, blue dulled
more than, less than words
mysterious, not really
sophisticated, quite absurd
breathes dreams, edged
defined by lines, innocence
space between, of another time
Edged
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
'odd lines, short poems, bits of prose'
Glad your having a good time with it …..I am not .
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Wow. Excellent piece, Eric.
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Thank you, Gabriela – this is one of those that reads different this UK (wet & windy) evening than when I wrote it early this (relatively bright) morning!
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To me it reads beautiful no matter the weather 🤗
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That’s because you are… says the man with the umbrella.
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Great read, Eric.
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Thank you, Bojana – a good day – both you and Gabriela like this – all I need now is Basilike – when I get all three of you I know I may be getting the hang of writing!
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I’m sure she’ll like it. Right, B?
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I really enjoyed reading and you have a great way with words and how you express yourself so clearly. I love that about your work. 🙂
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Thank you, Charlie.
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You are welcome my friend. Always a pleasure to read your incredible work. 🙂
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Love the wistful tone of this Eric. Beautiful writing.
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Thank you, Diana – and if you happen to visit on Wednesday you’ll see what the short guy with the umbrella is up to?
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🙂
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As usual, a lot said in a few words. I feel there is more to come?
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As usual, there’s a story in those lines… for another time.
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🤔
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