He’d love her
like she’d never been
he said he won’t, he would
she couldn’t take the risk
thinks she’s told him everything
she’d only just begun
Just Begun
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
'odd lines, short poems, bits of prose'
There’s always sth more to say.
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Isn’t that the truth!
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And so begins the journey and the testing time.
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There speaks a voice of experience…
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There is always more…
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For sure!
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I know that feeling but it has been a very long time ago. Very cleaver poem indeed my friend. It is something we all do isn’t it, women may do it more, perhaps we are more careful, I don’t know. This poem reminded me of when I first started dating my husband of almost 24 years. It brought a smile to my face. Hugs, Joni
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Thank you, Joni – I write words early morning, as they come to me on waking, sometimes I know their meaning, sometimes I put my trust in my sub-conscious that someone somewhere will relate in some way to them.
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Oh, that is when I often get my best ideas also. During my waking hour. Have a terrific week. Hugs Joni
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