She didn’t say he hadn’t heard
missed her love’s ricochet hit him
words their meaning his not hers
knew so many knowing no one
all it took its gone now
Six Words Into Verse – 3/Feb/20
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
'odd lines, short poems, bits of prose'
kinda like Johnny Depp and Amber Heard lol
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Haha. You’re back.
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yeah, kinda trying to read 1 million posts at once lol
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Good luck.
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It takes a couple of days 👋😂
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Don’t let me take your time.
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😂😂😂
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As Bojana said – You’re back – great! As for Johnny Deep – lol, easy mistake to make!
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😂😂🕺🕺
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I loved ‘ knew so many knowing no one’! A social media thing or just a social thing?
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Hello, Basilike -good to see you here again – I guess you’ve been busy with your move to Athens – has it happened yet? Ah, that line – classic social media syndrome!
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Hi, Eric! The move has happened, most apartment restorations are over, but I still don’t have an internet connection. I expect to have this solved this week.
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Good to hear – on both counts! And when you are online again a bit of news in my post ‘Timeline Reality’ from about a week ago – you know me, I like to intrigue (or be annoying!).
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Ha ha! Annoying never!
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“words their meaning his not hers” Eric, I am stunned. Exceptional piece.
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Thank you, Gabriela – that means so much to me.
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My pleasure, Eric.
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So many disconnects in this one. Poignant, Eric.
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That’s the thing with ‘six-words’ – at least mine – stand alone yet connected in some way…
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Yes. They’re always so clever and make me pause to ponder. 🙂
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