Faced the day again without him
woke up alone touched by another
grunts and groans no love emotion
moves prescriptive met his need only
when done she rolled from under
showered washed his taint from skin
dressed left a note in silence
when in the wrong place leave
…..
Time tells… wherever are, whoever with
Heart aching portrayal of what we do in haste to try and ease pain.
Another sharp insight into the small tragedies which loom large for the individual
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Thank you.
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Very telling!
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Thank you!
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You are welcome!
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Great read, Eric.
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Thank you, Bojana.
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Brilliantly written! Love this one! π€
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Thank you, charmed as ever!
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Damn good one ππ I love the form/ structure as well π you are a master of form Iβd say π§πππ€
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Thank you so much, Victoria – this is the form I’ll be using when I publish my lines and takes on poetry – testing the form/structure out on here.
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Awesome! It should be a great book to read…ππ»πΊπΊ
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Thanks again, Victoria!
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