Poem:
She didn’t like the tone of his silence
a day she’d prefer he didn’t breathe
he’ll not try that hard to please her
takes another glass of her iced tears
Six Words:
Just asking… why’s your shadow blue?
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Shadows
‘Tone of silence’! Wow!
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Thank you! Your comment makes for a better first line ‘She didn’t like his tone of silence’ which I’ll change to in the upcoming book.
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You are welcome! And thank you!
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I loved the tone of silence too. And why is a shadow blue?
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Hi Basilike – I’m currently pairing up poems and lines (mostly six words) from all I’ve written simply by instinct – a connection in my mind. In this case it was a play on ice – as for if a shadow can be blue I’ll say a transient aberration of diffusion, a tear blink and it’s gone…
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I like your poetic explanation, Eric 🙂
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Phew! Glad you like the explanation, Basilike … even though a scientist, nowadays I think I’d have struggled to go figure the energetic nuances of blue shadows!
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Mosquitoes and blue shadows! What’s next?
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There are three kinds of chemist – inorganic, organic and physical – I’m primarily one of them – what’s your instinct which?
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Physical?
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Absolutely – how well you read me!
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The mosquitoes helped a lot!
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I’m wondering too.
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From time to time I wonder about the both of you … in a good way he hastens to add!
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❤️
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Silence tone, mmmm.
I agree with the majority here. I love that
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Thank you, you’re in good company and very welcome here…
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