Out of the blue her eyes
The games hearts play so dangerous
Lips unzipped for tongue tip sips
Laid exhausted by young wanton wiles
Need defies the lines of years
Searched for meaning through inked fingertips
Her intentions lies no longer hide
One of many no way him
Mirror says old bald move on
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Six word lines and stories – if they come from one mind do they relate? I believe so, miscellany at play, in time and space. A click and you’re into miscellanies #1 and #2.
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Oh. So maybe naked was really naked. And the ending is bleak and sad. (Which means, well done to the poet.) My favorite line is “Lips unzipped for tongue tip sips.”
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I try to avoid mirrors nowadays! And thank you as always, Pam.
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I read this one a few times, Eric. A puzzle here for me, but the last line wraps it up and rather sadly. Personally, a bald head doesn’t bother me at all – just ask the hubby 😀
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The link to MIscellany #1 may help, to my mind the best of these – six-word lines posted over the years individually pulled together to create a form of poetry. And, yes I’ve misgivings about the last line of #3 – when I tweeted it I removed it. My best to you and hubby!
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Ah. Well that’s cool that they’re connected. I hadn’t considered that. 🙂
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