They sat
she wriggled some
gave a yelp
jumped up
touched her toes
he pulled splinters
one by one
by reflected light
a perfect moon
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EDC Shorts – Perfect Moon
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
Scientist writing – odd lines, poems even…
Perfect, indeed.
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Glad it wasn’t a bum poem …
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he pulled splinters one by one
by reflected light
a perfect moon — Sounds like haiku.
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Must be my subconscious – I’ve read a fair bit about poetic forms but my conscious mind I find adverse to discipline … and while I’m here, Basilike, there’s another ‘Wednesday’ more enigmatic me over at the Go Dog Go Cafe … if you fancy a coffee, that is?
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I always fancy a coffee with you. I went to the cafe, but saw your older posts. Please send a link whenever you can.
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Here you go, Basilike – https://godoggocafe.com/2019/04/10/river-crossing-eric-edc-writing/ – see you there …
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Thank you! I really don’t know why it’s so hard to find you.
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Believe me, I’m not hiding from you … we’ll have that coffee one day.
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Looking forward!
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What a sweet story. Tender images come into my mind
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Behind them now …
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Eric, you are too smart. I have to read this poem twice.
Excellent piece!
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My ploy to have you here for twice the time, G!
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It’s working 🙂
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