The tears she shed,
the ones she felt he couldn’t see,
he did.
EDC Shorts – He Did
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
Odd lines, poems, prose – relationships, observed, imagined, real?
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
Odd lines, poems, prose – relationships, observed, imagined, real?
The tears she shed,
the ones she felt he couldn’t see,
he did.
But does she realize he did?
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In fiction, maybe – in reality, unlikely – unless she knew that men like him exist?
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Or willing to believe they do?
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… believing sight unseen?
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It does go against Reason! But maybe sometimes…
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I love this Eric! When I read it I felt like I found a precious gem.
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Thank you, G – another comment gem from you.
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😊
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Nice. It raises so many questions. 🙂
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Thank you, Diana … I cut a punch line from this – glad I did!
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So true. Love this.
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Thank you, Bojana … these the kind of lines I enjoy writing most.
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So I’ve noticed.
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