EDC Shorts: Poetry – Skin Thin

Cold and can’t give

evidence skin thin

mind etched dogma

till his words seep in

♦

EDC – two post Wednesday – one here – one at the Go Dog Go Cafe

Published by EDC Writing/Believing Sight Unseen

charliezero1.wordpress.com says:

February 13, 2019 at 8:28 pm

Wonderful imagery and like always your poems are amazing. 🙂

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1. EDC Writing/Believing Sight Unseen says:
  
  February 13, 2019 at 8:34 pm
  
  Good to hear this worked – I’d shaved a few words from the first draft and thought I’d gone too sparse.
  
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  1. charliezero1.wordpress.com says:
    
    February 13, 2019 at 8:37 pm
    
    It worked very well. And your poems always get me thinking. That’s what I like a lot. 🙂
    
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D. Wallace Peach says:

February 15, 2019 at 11:47 pm

Oooh. I like the coldness as a sign of insecurity. Lots going on here in so few words. 🙂

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1. EDC Writing/Believing Sight Unseen says:
  
  February 16, 2019 at 8:27 am
  
  AS ever there’s a story here – yet another one to write!
  
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