Cold and can’t give
evidence skin thin
mind etched dogma
till his words seep in
♦
EDC – two post Wednesday – one here – one at the Go Dog Go Cafe
Story Tellers – Eric (EDC Writing)
EDC Shorts: Poetry – Skin Thin
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
EDC – scientist now writing – none of us is one thing – I've been called a few.
Wonderful imagery and like always your poems are amazing. 🙂
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Good to hear this worked – I’d shaved a few words from the first draft and thought I’d gone too sparse.
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It worked very well. And your poems always get me thinking. That’s what I like a lot. 🙂
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Oooh. I like the coldness as a sign of insecurity. Lots going on here in so few words. 🙂
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AS ever there’s a story here – yet another one to write!
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