She didn’t want to cry
need her reason why
not through hurt more ache
kindness too can break
EDC Shorts: Poetry – Ache
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
'odd lines, short poems, bits of prose'
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
'odd lines, short poems, bits of prose'
She didn’t want to cry
need her reason why
not through hurt more ache
kindness too can break
Yes, it can! Very well said!
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You get me as always – thank you, Basilike.
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You are welcome! It’s always good to read and get you!
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I’ve been there ❤️
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That kind of ache can take a while to ease away …
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Truthfully honest and yes! yes! to this poem.
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Thank you!
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🙂 You welcome my friend. 🙂
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Awesome one! 👌👍👍
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Thank you, Victoria (I’ve read somewhere that ‘Ray’ more cool, but believe me I’ve never been!)
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That last line is powerful, Eric. Well done.
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Thank you, Diana – that’s very kind of you!
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