He took the broken back
the bits she didn’t need
squeezed to put in place
didn’t fit without her face
EDC Shorts: Poetry – Face
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
EDC – scientist now writing – none of us is one thing – I've been called a few.
This brakes my heart. Very touching piece.
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Thank you, G – a transient break I hope!
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You are welcome! Oh, I can handle heart breaks, Eric. Anyway, thank you for the wonderful thought!
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Your poems r very tragic lately…
But I love it!
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Ah, I’ve been sorting out poems for ‘EDC Shorts’ a compilation of my lines and poetry – the tragic one’s you love I wrote a few years ago and I’m trying them out here to see if they work – it seems they do! Thank you, Victoria – I must catch up again with your blog soon! Eric.
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Fascinating. I’m reading a new book by Laura Lippman called SUNBURN. The female main character in that book reminds me so much of the female in many of your poems.
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Now I’m worried – there are two of them out there? I think I’ll risk a bit of ‘Sunburn’ – you’ve got me intrigued!
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