EDC Shorts: Poetry – Says

August 29, 2018 ~ EDC Writing/Believing Sight Unseen

He says …

she shakes, tumbles into night

She says …

he wakes, trembles into day

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raynotbradbury says:

August 29, 2018 at 8:55 am

They r meant to be…

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1. EDC Writing/Believing Sight Unseen says:
  
  August 29, 2018 at 3:54 pm
  
  Female intuition? I was thinking the opposite but you’ve made me have a re-think!
  
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  1. raynotbradbury says:
    
    August 29, 2018 at 3:56 pm
    
    Haha yes! Time to re-think :))
    
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D. Wallace Peach says:

August 31, 2018 at 8:35 pm

I like the contrast. It says much about the two.

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1. EDC Writing/Believing Sight Unseen says:
  
  August 31, 2018 at 8:49 pm
  
  Thank you – the contrast the thing that drew me to write it … what it means I’m not too sure of?
  
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  1. D. Wallace Peach says:
    
    August 31, 2018 at 8:53 pm
    
    The meaning seems more relationship specific, but intriguing. 🙂
    
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