He says …
she shakes, tumbles into night
She says …
he wakes, trembles into day
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EDC Shorts: Poetry – Says
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
Scientist writing – odd lines, poems even…
They r meant to be…
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Female intuition? I was thinking the opposite but you’ve made me have a re-think!
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Haha yes! Time to re-think :))
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I like the contrast. It says much about the two.
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Thank you – the contrast the thing that drew me to write it … what it means I’m not too sure of?
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The meaning seems more relationship specific, but intriguing. 🙂
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