‘He can’t help the way he looks … her affection he mistook’
‘She can’t help the way she looks … his affection she mistook’
EDC Shorts: Lines – Looks … Both Ways
EDC Writing – Believing Sight Unseen
Odd lines, poems, prose – relationships, observed, imagined, real?
I like the way “looks” can have different meanings in this. Thought-provoking.
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So often switching his to her and he to she can change perception. It’s what I think most about in these otherwise spontaneous line post.
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