Held her hand … she let go
[Six Words – my line your mind #63]
EDC Shorts: ‘six words’ – lines – poetry #125
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His & Her words – internet liaisons / Their Days – Sam & Erin's story // EDC Shorts: six words – lines – poetry
These are powerful. They get me every time I their simple depth.
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Thank you.
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Great line!
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Thank you.
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you are welcome! I love your posts!
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Oooh. Lot’s of wondering behind this one.
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Got to admit my initial thought that of an optimistic male…
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Sometimes 6 words can say so much…
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Thank you – and sometimes say different things to different people…
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True!
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In a preface to an anthology of very short SF stories the editor explained how essential it was not to waste one word.
I see you have that spot on!
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Thanks Roger!
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Keep on keeping on!
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It amazes me how some people can say so much using just six words….I wish I could learn this technique
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I don’t know if this helps – I started by writing about relationships as single thoughts without regard to the number of words. These lines could be as few as five and up to maybe a dozen words. Then I came across ‘six word stories’ (which at that point I’d never heard of) and kind of got intrigued by them. I now find ‘six words’ a way of fixing ideas in my head to use in my poetry and prose – a kind of mental post it note I find easy to recall. The important thing is that they work for you in some way and if other folk like them too and let you know it’s really nice – thank you. Eric.
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Thanks Eric. I am going to try this
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